Essay Feedback

I submitted my essay half-completed (which I am absolutely NOT proud of), but I guess its better than nothing? Anyhow, I have the basic frame of what I would like to include in my essay, and can continue to develop from here.

Richard's Feedback

Richard commented upon the fact that my essay was obviously incomplete, but it was a good start. He said that if I submitted it as it was it would probably scrape a pass, which was actually quite reassuring. Something that I struggled with quite a lot was synthesising the visual and contextual elements of the essay and practical response. He suggested that I make the second half of the essay to do with how the issues raised in the first half can be resolved through different methods of visual communication, which makes a lot more sense.

This has given me more of a boost in terms of how to shape my argument, rather than just pulling quotes out of thin air and trying to apply them to a worthy cause.

Plan of Action

• Research the scholars that Richard recommended: O'shaugnessy and O'shaughnessy
• Product more practical responses to visual methods of communication
• Continue to develop research in general