In groups of three we read each other's essays and gave feedback on to how we performed on each criteria. It was really interesting to see how the other people in my group had structured their essays and interpreted their illustrations. Reading my feedback I was happy to hear that responded well to the criteria giving a detailed analysis of each point, resulting in a clear discourse of the picture, 'mental health apps'.
To improve, I could have gone into more depth about what was happening in society in 2012 to gain a more thorough understanding of what could have influenced Lowndes in his development of the illustration. I also could have talked more about why Lowndes might have chosen his specific colour scheme, what the colours might mean and what they might represent.
Thinking about themes and discourses for further development, I could compare society today with society before technology 'took over'. I have been thinking about looking into how the development of technology has made us become less sociable and more isolated, and how we prefer to create online avatars of ourselves through social media, that often indicate a 'false identity' in comparison with the way the 'real world' sees us.
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