Tuesday, 2 February 2016

First Essay Draft

This week has been such a struggle, with really having to get a move on with Responsive after the 504 hand in, PPP presentations yesterday and the draft submission deadline for COP today. I am disappointed in myself that I was unable to properly finish the draft of my essay, although I tried my best to get down as much as I could in order to gain some constructive feedback as to where I can make improvements.


'What measures can we implicate as a nation to efficiently utilise the NHS’ resources and ensure its future is secure?'

Providing free health care at the point of delivery has granted the United Kingdom triumph and pride since 1948. Yet, today the National health service is being stretched to spending an extortionate £2 billion per week, and with crippling external factors such as an ageing population and cuts to government spending, the future for the NHS seems to be extremely uncertain. If we look at current statistics and where most of the NHS budget is currently being spent, a red light is flashing on conditions that reflect poor lifestyle choices such as type two diabetes, obesity and addiction rehabilitation. As conditions such as these are commonly judged as ‘avoidable’ and ‘self-inflicted’, a large percentage of health care professionals, and patients suffering with un-preventable conditions become frustrated with the principle that the money could have been better spent elsewhere.
In a society that is constantly being exploited by influences from the media, consumerism and rapidly developing technology, we are indirectly being negatively encouraged to indulge in damaging life-style choices that could have serious consequences on our health and wellbeing, such as consuming too much sugar and processed foods, drinking, smoking and not doing enough exercise, to name a few. This is causing major concerns for the younger generation, currently with one in three children being certified as obese before they start school, the NHS will not be able to cope with the level of demand for weight and lifestyle related conditions in the future.
Already, the nation is taking action to tackle the problem of developing preventable conditions, for example;  Jamie Oliver’s latest campaign to put a 20% tax on sugary drinks, and the government’s ‘change for life’ programme, educating people of all ages on ways they can make positive lifestyle changes resulting in better health and wellbeing. If more emphasis and funding was put into educating the nation about the consequences that poor lifestyle choices can inflict, this well may encourage people of all ages to prioritise the importance of their health before making bad decisions, which will ultimately result in the NHS having to spend less money on patients with conditions that could be avoided.

Following the Global ‘Credit Crunch’ in 2007/8, spending cuts have been made to all areas of government funding, removing a large number of essential benefits and services from the nation.   The NHS has faced its biggest financial squeeze in history with the budget effectively being frozen since 2010, increasing by just enough to cover inflation’(Kings Fund, 2015) which has resulted in a massive increase in pressure to provide good quality care for all whom require it, as well as tighter decision-making processes when deciding whether patients conditions and circumstances are eligible for NHS funding. The Conservative government promised to annually increase the NHS’s budget in last years general election, giving the public hope that the service will continue to serve its purpose and  meet individual needs. However due to other external factors, and the decisions made in the previous Coalition government, between 2010 and 2021 spending will have increased by £356 billion in cash terms, yet approximately £246 billion of the budget will be absorbed by inflation. This will result in a real increase of £116 billion, which only accounts to a 0.9% increase on an annual basis. In a recent BBC Panorama documentary, figures were shown that if the NHS is operating in the same way that it is today in five years time, it will be overspending by approximately £30 billion, which it simply cannot afford to do.

As precious time is running out, effective decisions need to be put in place to prevent the NHS from collapsing; but this is becoming exceedingly difficult with the pressures of providing care for an ageing population that are getting older and sicker. Growing old is not something that can be prevented as opposed to conditions such as type two diabetes, which already consumes a massive 10% of the NHS budget annually. It seems that long term illnesses are becoming somewhat of a huge strain to the NHS, taking into consideration the two conditions listed above as well as cancer, heart and respiratory problems, dementia and depression combined together cover almost 70% of the nations budget. Organisations across the UK have already began strategically  planning to tackle this complex issue. In Liverpool, one of the most un-healthy cities in England, representatives from the entire spectrum of the health establishment are currently at the front line of the battle to save the NHS with a programme called ‘Healthy Liverpool’. It’s strategy has five areas devised  to follow the input of health care professionals, simultaneously involving the community. These are: Living well, Digital Care and Innovation, Community Services, Urgent and Emergency Care and Hospital Services. Together, these five areas have been put in place to sustain and fulfil the capacity of the services provided and offer the most suitable form of care for each patient, for example having more community services available to work with patients regularly and close to their homes will prevent prolonged and un-necessary hospital stays, which will ultimately save a lot of money as well as keeping the patients comfortable and content. In summary, ‘Healthy Liverpool’ are using a strategic method of moving around the money already available to the areas which need it the most, to prevent it being spent for purposed that could be prevented.

Providing better social and community care alone is not enough to save the NHS, though it does show great potential to make a positive impact. Another example of how organisations are trying to tackle this crisis is the public health programme called ‘Change4Life’ launched by the department of health in 2009. The programme is the UK’s first social marketing campaign to try and tackle the causes of obesity, which is becoming a rising global epidemic. Change4Life is targeted at a large audience ranging from children to middle aged adults, also emphasising how to get involved with families. It helps people that are currently involved with making lifestyle choices that are damaging their health, to make gradual and manageable changes to their diet and level of physical activity, as well as focusing on other areas such as suitable levels of alcohol consumption in adults. Reflecting upon the slogan ‘eat well, move more, live longer’, Change4Life encourages six healthy behaviours, which include: eating 5 portions of fruit and vegetables a day, reducing the level of salt intake, cutting back on fat, swapping sugary snacks for healthier options, cutting down on alcohol consumptions and taking part in regular exercise. Statistics show that the affect of Change4Life on public attitudes was extremely positive. In its first year over 400,000 families joined the campaign and over 1 million families claimed to have made changes to their children’s behaviour as a result. In 2016, Change4Life has launched a new healthy eating campaign called ‘sugar smart’ with the aim of informing the public on how they can reduce their intake of sugar and become aware of ‘hidden’ sugars in certain foods. They have launched a new ‘sugar smart’ app which scans barcodes on food packaging and displays the sugar content in grams and cubes, which will help prevent the public, especially children slipping into poor eating habits that could result in a number of health issues in the future. If the sugar smart campaign is effective, the NHS would save a significant amount of money with reduced numbers of children being admitted to hospital with tooth decay; the current leading cause of admissions in children. In 2013, approximately 46,500 children and young adults under the age of 19 were admitted to hospital with tooth decay, resulting in the need for extractions costing the NHS a £30 million, which subsequently is a cause that could be prevented.

If campaigns such as Change4Life, and other community based projects that follow the same principles as Healthy Liverpool were the focus of the public’s lives, then positive changes would be rapidly occurring. However, if we take into account all of the other influential external factors that exist in todays society, then unfortunately these solutions will not solely be the answer to cure our unhealthy population, and ultimately save the NHS. 
The food industries that operate in more economically developed countries have a great deal of power and generate a great deal of money, which together can have a heavy influence on consumers choices, leading to influencing lifestyle habits, all in the name of profit. One of their most powerful tools is advertising; the methods undertaken in order to persuade a customer to purchase a particular product. 
Two authors in particular that have considered the negative implications of advertising Stegemen (1991) and Berger (1972) have both commented on the fact that both money and power of persuasion is the most pervasive way to generate customer sales. For instance Stegemen has stated in one of his issues of The American Review that “critics portray advertising as a socially pointless attempt to capture market share through psychological manipulation” which demonstrates the ability to acknowledge the language, imagery and placing that companies can use to persuade consumers that they need to buy their products. Berger has a similar judgement by expressing that “publicity is the culture of consumer society”, implying that the basic human need to provide for the self is driven by influences of higher powers, which also emphasises the point made by Stegemen that society is extremely vulnerable to manipulative methods of advertising.
Companies that sell fast food and sugary drinks, for example McDonalds and Coca-Cola are some of the worst culprits of practicing manipulative advertising. A method commonly used by these companies is brand association; a large percentage of their television commercials ironically feature people partaking in activities that release endorphins and make people happy, for example socialising with friends and exercising. The people featured in these commercials are shown consuming the products that the companies sell- sugary drinks and fast food, which creates an association with the customer that says ‘if you buy this product, you will be as happy as the people our in our commercial’, which from a critical perspective is a completely misleading and unrealistic concept. Creating a utopian desire of happiness through advertising is extremely damaging to vulnerable members of our society, particularly children. Fast food companies are particularly good at persuading children, and urging them to continually pester their parents to make repeat purchases of their products. For example including a free toy in the infamous McDonalds ‘Happy Meal’ contributes to the excitement of their dining experience, and it is common for the child to aim to collect all of the toys in a particular collection, therefore making regular visits to McDonalds, and regularly consuming food that contains alarming percentages of saturated fats and sugars; another factor that does not help the growing rate of childhood obesity. (QUOTE 5 HERE)Simultaneously stimulating the imaginations of children through the use of fictional mascots also is a major cause of interest, again creating an element of excitement leading to the desire to buy these unhealthy products. Characters such as ‘Ronald McDonald’, ‘Tony the Tiger’ and the ‘Nestle Bunny’ all subconsciously create brand associations with children; with the help of entertaining narrative elements within animated commercials, children are more likely to take an interest in eating these companies products which contain high levels of sugars and fats, than they are in eating alternative healthy products.(QUOTE 3 HERE)
The level of exposure to unhealthy foods is also somewhat alarming, with up to seven showings of sugary/fast food commercials being shown in between prime time weekend family shows, such as The X Factor and Britain’s Got Talent, which is more likely to increase the chances of families to order fast food takeaways due to the persuasion used in said adverts. Another technique used by supermarkets to encourage impulse purchasing is product placement, which can be targeted at children by placing sugary products such as drinks and chocolate bars directly at their eye level, and at the check-out queueing areas, triggering an urge to buy such products. However, supermarkets are not solely to blame for the rise in weight gain and childhood obesity; the universal ‘traffic light’ system implemented in 2013 was designed to make customers think twice about the healthy and unhealthy ingredients they are consuming. The traffic light consists of a colour coded pie chart informing the customer of the level of total sugars, calories, fats, saturated fats and salt that is contained in individual products, ranging from green to red representing healthy and unhealthy. Detailed food labelling has had a positive impact on the decisions that customers are making in relation to purchasing healthy food products, and has began to make the nation aware of the importance of maintaining a healthy diet. If paying attention to food labelling was taken seriously by the whole population, then the levels of diet related illnesses would significantly decrease, releasing the NHS of the pressures to cope with treating the high level of patients with these preventable conditions.

Looking from a wider perspective, we cannot point our fingers at the food industry alone when searching for a blame for the nations poor lifestyle choices resulting in poor quality of health. Between 1980 and 2014, obesity has more than doubled on a global basis which has been caused by a combination of different factors. However, obesity is not the only condition that has arisen from negative external factors, there are many other problems in society that have an equal contribution to the detriment of our health and wellbeing.
The development of technology has decreased the need for many jobs that require a high level of labour, as well as improving transport links, urban planning and increase of sedentary working environments, resulting in less of a mandatory demand to be fit and active in terms of employment. As the world around is developing so rapidly, the environments that we are situated in have become increasingly fast paced and competitive, with additional pressure to succeed and achieve a sense of satisfaction. With a vast catalogue of complex global issues desperately trying to be resolved by those in power, it is difficult for any one of us to endure extended periods of peace of mind without being directly, or indirectly affected in one way or another. Stress is the bodies natural reaction to situations that cause feelings of unease and uncertainty; taking into consideration all of the factors listed above, our nation has become exceedingly vulnerable in the means of tolerating these external pressures. 
A common characteristic of tackling stress is to make poor lifestyle choices which could be seen as a distraction, escape, or ‘coping mechanism’ to help gain a sense of relief from these pressures and insecurities. The vast majority of these coping mechanisms can be extremely harmful to both our physical and mental health, which could include smoking, taking drugs, alcoholism, eating too much/ too little etc. Mental health issues such as anxiety, depression, OCD and phobias affect people of all ages, but more commonly those who are experiencing a considerable amount of stress, for example young people struggling at school and university and people in their twenties struggling to find their feet adapting to the pressures responsibilities of adult life. Deterioration of mental health can have severe consequences that can be heavily influenced by external factors, for example during the recession between 2008 and 2013, the rate of suicide increased by 8% among women, and 9% among men with the correlation of unemployment, debt and repossession. Mental health is commonly misunderstood amongst society, as it is not as black and white as other long term conditions that have more of a physical impact such as cancer, diabetes and heart disease. (QUOTES 6 and 7 HERE) Yet, in hindsight it is easy to look back and wonder if such psychological triggers and stressful circumstances could have been avoided to prevent the increase in mental health issues, in a similar way that we view how the nation has been suffocated with the exposure of unhealthy foods with the powerful exploitation that the art of persuasion possesses. 


To conclude, each and every one of us will fall ill at some point in our lives, whether this is a result of self inflicted action, external influence or natural occurrence, and we will rely on the National Health Service to aid our recovery and nurse us back to health. Our nation is extremely gifted to have access to this fantastic service, but in todays society with an ageing population and a large number of long term health conditions spiralling out of control, the NHS is struggling to cope with the demand of patients needing care and the lack of funds to provide it, resulting in a rising level of uncertainty this service to continue in the future. It is almost impossible to devise a solution that will solve all of the problems contributing to the decline of the NHS, but it is not so difficult to highlight areas that require drastic improvement to reduce the risk of serious health conditions caused by poor lifestyle choices. Persuasion in the means of comfort is more powerful than persuasion in the means of positive change, and due to gradual changes in social and working environments since the rise and development of technology, we have become surrounded with easier and less laborious methods of completing every day tasks. Therefore we are less inclined to take ‘the long way around’ requiring more physical means of activity, than we are with the ease of completing things at the touch of a button.  The combination of our generation adapting to a sedentary approach to life, food companies using exploiting methods of advertising, lack of knowledge about maintaining a balanced diet, external pressures to succeed and coping mechanisms that follow are all contributing to destroying the NHS, and to some extent, can all be prevented. Current undergoing campaigns using social marketing methods and alterations of areas where care is provided are proved to be helping this crisis, but it is uncertain whether or not alone they are powerful enough to completely put a stop to avoidable conditions such as the worryingly sharp increase of obesity and illnesses related to it. (QUOTE 4 HERE)There is no set answer that will provide a successful solution to this vast complexity of life threatening problems, but if the forces in power such as the government and public health committees implement stricter regulations that overcome the power of persuasion by comfort that so many vulnerable people are succumbed to, in the form of improved health education, and other solutions to make people aware of the damage that their behaviour is causing to their health, the power of positive change may succeed, resulting in the NHS increasing in strength and being able to survive in the foreseeable future.



Bibliography

  • 'Critics portray advertising as a socially pointless attempt to capture market share through psychological manipulation' Stegeman,M. (1991)Advertising in competitive markets, the American Economic Review’ Vol.81, No.1 p210-223
  • ‘Publicity is the culture of the consumer society. It propagates through images that society’s belief in itself’ Berger, J.(1972)Ways of Seeing’.Harmondsworth: Penguin. p139
  • ‘As with any industry, money and influence will be used in a manner that will support the continued viability of the industry. When the interests of industry and public health clash and are opposed, however, the insidious nature of industry practices becomes apparent’ Kushi, Lawrence, H. (2003) Review of Food Politics: How the Food Industry Influences Nutrition and Health. Journal of Public Health Policy, Volume 24, No.1, Palgrave Macmillan Journals p63–66.
  • ‘To combat food oppression effectively, activists must lobby the government to create meaningful, sustainable change through education, regulation, taxation and redistribution’. Freeman, A.(2007)Fast Food: Oppression Through Poor Nutrition.California Law Review Vol.95, No.6 p2221–59.
  • More generally, fast food restaurants would not choose to advertise if advertising did not increase the demand for their products. Unless fast-food demand perfectly crowds out demand for other foods that are equal in calories, body weight will increase since consumers will never choose to perfectly offset the increased food demand with more exercise’. Chou, S,Rashad,I,and Grossman,M.(2008)Fast‐food Restaurant Advertising on Television and Its Influence on Childhood Obesity. The Journal of Law & Economics 51. [University of Chicago Press, Booth School of Business, University of Chicago, University of Chicago Law School] p599–618.
  • ‘Some see mental illness as routed primarily in environmental factors such as family upbringing and social stressors’ Schnittker,J, Freese, J and Powell,B. (2000)Social Forces Vol.78, No.3, p1101-1132
  • Mental illness has the dubious distinction of serving as a mirror for the complexities and demands of the surrounding society’ Harold W. Demone, Jr. (1968)The Annals of the American Academy of Political and Social Science, Vol. 378, p22-33




Fig.1: Holcroft,J. (2014), Unknown title, [editorial illustration], available from <http://digitalsynopsis.com/design/32-retro-style-thought-provoking-illustrations-john-holcroft/>
Fig.2: Thibault,S.(2015), Britain’s media are ignoring issues [illustration], available from <http://www.sebastienthibault.com/The-Guardian-Britain-s-media-are-ignoring-issues>
Fig.3: Sales,E. (2014), Witty Illustrations [illustration], available from <http://www.lostateminor.com/2014/02/06/witty-illustrations-eduardo-sales/>
     Fig.4: Seth,M. (2014),Childhood Obesity [infographic], available from <https://www.behance.net/gallery/CHILDHOOD-OBESITY-Infographic/14701727>
Fig.5: DRL.(2010), Diabetes [advertisement], available from <http://creativecriminals.com/drl/diabetes>

Friday, 29 January 2016

Essay Planning/ Refining Question

Development

The research that I have undertaken since the beginning of the project has shaped the content of my essay question into a clearer subject to explore rather than a vague, open-ended statement.

It has developed from:
  • How are people with ‘avoidable medical conditions' viewed by society?
  • 'would the NHS be more cost efficient if the government were to subsidise more valuable health education?'
To:
What measures can we implicate as a nation to efficiently utilise the NHS’ resources and ensure its future is secure?

This question has more structure and more scope to research into different areas, rather than just an opinionated, subjective argument or a question with a simple 'yes/no' answer.

Essay Plan

Introduction
  • Outline NHS issues
  • How external pressures in society are affecting our health
  • Potential solutions; sugar tax, more money being spent on health education
Paragraph 1: Figures
  • How the recession has affected the NHS budget
  • Recent Government electoral promises and how they plan to change things for the future (and if it will work)
  • Back up with quotes and predictions from Panorama documentary 
Paragraph 2: Current Action to save the NHS
  • 'Healthy Liverpool' scheme
  • Logical theories on where money can be utilised to the most efficient standard
  • 'Change4life' social marketing campaign
Paragraph 3: The negative affects of advertising
  • Power of the food industries
  • Subliminal messages portrayed, different types of advertising
  • How the food industry targets children
  • Product placement and timing of television adverts
  • Food labelling
Paragraph 4: Is society making us unwell?
  • Stress and mental health
  • Ageing population, increased pressures on all aspects of life
  • How we are vulnerable, insecure and easily influenced by the power of these adverts which will make us more likely to take up bad habits/poor lifestyle choices
Conclusion
  • Persuasion in the means of comfort is more powerful than persuasion in the means of positive change
  • It is impossible to un-do the 'comfort' that technology has bought us
  • If more money was spent on educating the nation about health (raised by sugar tax?) this would be an effective solution.
Reflection


I think that at this stage, I am in an ~okay~ position with the direction of my essay and the appropriate quotes and images that I am planning on referencing, although I know that there is a lot of room for development and refining. 
In the net few days I plan on writing up the draft for my essay to the best of my ability, and continuing to carry out further research in the mean time in case I need to (I definitely will need to) add further amendments when I receive feedback.

Thursday, 21 January 2016

Visual Journal

My visual journal got off to a relatively slow start due to struggling where to start. I have decided that the best approach will be to find related articles to my subject and produce visual responses for them in a kind of editorial format. 



The end to the free vasectomy (to help save the NHS money) would contradict itself in the way that there would be more unwanted pregnancies as a result, which will defeat the object in terms of cost. 




This article emphasises the threat that obesity imposes on women's health, and the increased risk that certain conditions could arise such as type two diabetes, heart disease and cancer. In these simple drawings and paintings I have shown daily processes that women will have to go through if their health deteriorates, including having to take daily medication, going for checkups on a regular basis and simultaneously being judged by others. The measuring tape acts as a metaphor for strangling the internal organs due to pressure of being overweight.

Reflection

Although basic, I feel like this is a good starting point to begin to explore imagery in synthesis to my topic. Editorial process help to visually unpick and bring together important aspects of a topic and summarise them in a visual way. I will continue to read the news daily and keep myself updated on the state of healthcare and obesity.


Wednesday, 30 December 2015

Triangulation and Harvard Referencing

Triangulation

A number of authors have considered the value placed on creative craftsmen and women in a world which we have been bought up to believe that the best form of utilising creative practice would be to apply their skills to methods of advertising. Ken Garland (1964), Kalman (1998)and Adbusters (2000) have all commented on the fact that creative talents have always been undermined by corporate committees, as 'creative people are now working for the bottom line'. For instance the Adbusters in their 'First things first 2000 manifesto' describe how 'there are pursuits more worthy of our problem-solving skills, unprecedented environmental, social and cultural crises demand our attention. 
These statements are all completely valid, as we as creatives do not want to fall subject to the brainwashed, small minded culture that is consumerism. It's about time that more value was placed on creative practice and visual communicators so that we can use our skills to create more sustainable forms of communication for more worthwhile purposes.

Analysis

'Barcode trees' by Jane Hazlewood accurately illustrates todays global commercial culture. The roots of the tree formed by a barcode suggest that we place more value in reaping consumerism more than we do than the things that are more important, such as personality, talent, the environment and many other factors. The colour scheme portrays the very 'black and white' outlook on consumer culture and the mindless desire for more and more until one eventually wastes away, never satisfied.


Evaluation

Garland's manifesto (1964) laid out the initial foundations as to where creative practice should and shouldn't exist, and how creatives should not be exploited by advertising corporations. He sternly states that 'we do not advocate the abolition of high pressure consumer advertising: it is not feasible'. Then goes on to plead 'we hope that our society will tire of gimmick merchants, status salesmen and hidden persuaders, and that the prior call on our skills will be for worthwhile purposes', which assists in outlining and emphasising the importance of our rights as creatives, and identifying areas of potential exploitation that could undermine the industry. 
His use of language could be seen as more of a 'soft' approach to the matter in comparison with the Adbusters (1998)who comment on the consequences of devoting efforts to advertising on a wider perspective. They comment on the fact that those individuals are 'supporting and implicitly endorsing a mental environment so saturated with commercial messages that it is changing the very way citizen-consumers speak, think,feel,respond and interact', which outlines the severity of how the mind-numbing culture is undermining the creative industry, and how in a way that they are contradicting themselves by subjecting to this.

Paraphrase

Writing to highlight the negative implications of corporate power in 'Fuck Committees', Kalman (1998) claims that 'virtually all creative industries have been freed from ideas, individual passion, and have been relegated to a role of corporate servitude, and that creative people are now working for the bottom line'. Kalman also aims to demonstrate how important it is to 'find creative lunatics, treat them well and use their money to change the world', and he does this by bringing the fact that in our society 'creative people have their work reduced to content or intellectual property' to the readers attention.

Bibliography

Adbusters,2000)First things first 2000, Eye magazine, no.3, vol.8

Garland,K(1998)First things first manifesto, 13 Oakley Square, London

Hazelwood,J(2015) Barcode Trees [ONLINE]. Available at: https://society6.com/product/barcode-trees-illustration_framed-print#12=52&13=54 [Accessed 20 December 2015].

Kalman,T.(1998)Fuck Committees [online]. Available from:http://www.manifestoproject.it/fuck-committees/[Accessed 20 December 2015]


Saturday, 12 December 2015

Subculture and the meaning of style lecture

'Subculture' is defined as a cultural group within a larger culture, often having beliefs or interests at variance with those of a larger culture. 
In the documentary 'Subculture, the meaning of style', it looks at symbolising subcultures to challenge the values of mainstream society. It also looks at incorporation and social order, how it sucks symbolic threat back into the midst and ends up being conventional.


  • Youth culture started post war when there was no longer a need for regiments and uniform
  • It has a lot to do with music, money and marketable goods; this creates subculture
  • The 'teddy boys' was the first identifiable look that was 'divorced' from appearance. It was a bold and strong look.
  • Youth culture was all about rejecting the culture around you and striving to be different
  • For the lower classes, it was all about adopting a style and making their own in a more affordable manor.

  • The 'Rockers' were a utilitarian, more muscular American culture based on bikes and leather, made British.
  • It was the first movement to show that there was a generation gap.
  • The media was fundamental- radio and TV.
  • Fear was also fundamental; it was essential to have something that people didn't understand and were intimidated by.
  • Each subculture has a sensation that the media leaps on, it starts as an elitist until the media jumps on it.
  • In the fifties, when all of this started, all youths had was what they wore. That's what they stood for.

  • 'Mod' comes from a period where people looking were looking forward as opposed to looking back
  • Mod's rode vespa scooters, it gave teenagers independence and made them look cool
  • It was a movement that was all defined by men
  • Drugs became a big part of the subculture too, which created even more of a generation gap.
  • There were three phases of mod; jazz, r&b and the who/small faces.
  • This then broke off into the hippies and the skinheads.

  • During the 'wind thrush', boats full of Caribbean citizens moved over to England. As a result of this, the 'rude boy' culture arose. It was edgy, dangerous and anti-mainstream.
  • It was the emphasis of masculinity, bringing over mento and ska.

  • The 'skinheads' were like working class mods; style and music bought black and white together in this subculture.
  • The whole thing was over by 1970, when the media blew it out of proportion. 
  • There was a reform in the mid 70's, but it was a minority.

  • Soul power was all about dance, the 'winners' made themselves the centre of attention
  • Wigan was the home of Northern Soul
  • It was black music being enjoyed by lower class whites, and all about having a good dance!
  • There were no bands to follow, it was all an underground movement; the music didn't come to you, you had to go to it.
  • Southern soul was more or a jelly shoes, ear piercing white kid/black kid thing, but was ultimately about accepting people from other races.

  • In the 1970's, Britain was dismal. So along came punk, just because people needed something to do.
  • It was a post-modern idea, put together by Malcom McLaren. The commonalities made a context (so it was like a combination of all of the cultures).
  • Nobody looked like each other
  • Everything that you did had a meaning; 'do it your own way- it doesn't matter if you get it wrong'.
  • Girls had more power; this was like the rise of feminism
  • The sex pistols ended punk when Steve Jones swore live on television; punk then got completely blown up by the media and became a mockery 'pantomime'.

  • Punk and reggae merged together to create 'two-tone'. It was a movement that wanted to change things.
  • Britain was a mess at this time. The song 'ghost town' by the Specials suited this down to a tee.

  • In the 'beaten generation', affluence started to kick in.
  • 'Casual' was a movement that WASN'T lead by music...it was lead by football.
  • Liverpool bought loads of designer sportswear over and it fuelled the football hooligans.
  • Ecstasy killed it.

  • Rave was a real 'grass-roots' movement; it was like a hippy-creative atmosphere
  • It was big field sized stuff, it wasn't in clubs.
  • Then again, the media became involved and rave became a national thing.
  • After 1987, movements and subcultures died out and instead, musical genres over took.
  • Brit pop was the last definable culture, it was a set of retro enthusiasm that was very backward looking.

  • NOW; everyone as easily acquired musical tastes
  • Everything can be done at the touch of a button- subcultures aren't needed
  • In this generation, politics is more of a driving force now.
  • With youths today, the only way to shock them is to be honest.

What I gained from this lecture

I didn't know anything much about subcultures before watching this documentary, but I am fascinated about how the power of style and music could influence and drive groups of people to become so passionate and dedicated to following and being a part of these movements. 
I feel slightly envious that I have grown up in such a disconnected era, where the generation thrives on attention, false statements of popularity and narcissism. There was something so inspiring and uplifting about being a part of a sub-culture and celebrating style and music that became a part of your identity. I find it interesting that this unique and  power could never exist and exceed today, and I question what would it take to drive a generation to be connected once more.

Saturday, 5 December 2015

Group Crit

Task
I presented my ideas to the group today; we each had a discussion about our topics and fed back our ideas to each other.

Is this realistic for a 3000 word essay?

Yes, the topic is very important and fits in to todays issues within society.

Is the argument focussed or very general?

Might be a little too general, but valid. Good that I am relating to current affairs, it makes it more interesting and relevant to explore.

Does the question match the argument?

It does, there are lots of areas to discuss and write about with having an issue that is affected by so many external factors.

Do the sources and quotes match well?

They do, but more are needed to back up your points. Look into persuasive advertising more and health journals too.

Any suggestions? Sources to look at etc?

  • Supersize vs superskinny (documentary)
  • Books looking at weight loss
  • Journals/articles about government spending
  • Estudio
Feedback action plan

What feedback did I receive? What were the points?
  • My argument is strong and has potential
  • Good imagery to back up the points
  • Look at more advertising sources
  • The question matches my argument clearly
  • Very good that it relates to current affairs
What are my priorities
  • MORE RESEARCH!
  • Spend an afternoon or a day just researching!
Plan of activities- Actions, resources, dates/weeks
  • By December 13th: have all research and sources available. In this time, read as much as I can on the current government spending issues.
  • By December 20th: have the first draft completed 
  • By January 4th: do some sketchbook work

Wednesday, 2 December 2015

Further Research

Admittedly, COP for me has been sitting on the old back burner for a while...but I have had a few brain waves in between.

Struggles

I have been feeling like my title 'how are the obese victimised in society' is far too vague; I don't want to be in a similar situation to last year where my essay title is so open ended that I have no idea where on earth I am going with it.

I had a thought about what I am actually interested in and what I want to find out more about. As a nation, we all depend on the NHS providing us with the best quality care and treatment when we are unwell. Without this some of us would not be able to afford the services that they provide, which in some cases could be life threatening. Therefore I have decided to flip the question on its head a little and try to focus more on how the NHS can survive in the current financial climate with the help of the attitude and behaviour of the nation contributing in a more positive way.

I have decided to alter my title to(no doubt this will change again) 'would the NHS be more cost efficient if the government were to subsidise more valuable health education?'

This way I feel like I have a question to answer rather than just pushing some opinions on a very open ended statement about the obese.

Things I want to discuss in my essay

  • Child educational development, as children grow up they need to know what is good and bad for you. If they learn fundamental information at a young age they will develop as values for the rest of their lives
  • How this generation has been so affected by the development of technology, how this has lead to some poor lifestyle factors
  • SUGAR (inspired by 'Jamie's sugar rush')How much money is spent on treating type two diabetes
  • Cuts in the NHS, how they will be affect people in different ways


References (so far)

ADVERTISING

  • 'Critics portray advertising as a socially pointless attempt to capture market share through psychological manipulation' (Stegeman,M (1991)Advertising in competitive markets, the American Economic Review vol.81, No.1 p210-223)
BEHAVIOUR 
  • 'Like many risk factors for disease, obesity results from behaviour and shows a social gradient. Especially among women, obesity is more common among lower income individuals, less education and some ethnic/racial minorities' (Alder,N,Stewart,J (2009)The Milbank Quarterly vol.87, No.1 p47-70)
  • 'The number of obese or overweight people in developing countries rose from 250 million to almost one billion in under three decades, and these rates are rising significantly faster than in rich nations'

I definitely need some more, but I am struggling to find them as this is such a current issue only specific to the UK. I will speak to my tutor in the next session to gain some advice on where to look for some effective academic references.

ESSAY PLAN

Introduction
  • How much our nation depends upon the NHS-emphasise health and wellbeing importance
  • Outline current issues of spending, debt and any other external government issues
  • What I want to ultimately find out; is there enough evidence there to prove that improving education will have a more positive impact on our lifestyle choices and therefore health.
  • How much danger the younger generation is in today being surrounded by all of these corruptions

Paragraph One: Government spending cuts, how has this affected the NHS so far? (outlining the current position of the NHS)

  • The whole country is in debt, constantly trying to cut back which means it is inevitable that certain groups of people will be affected not just in terms of health (this is the route of the problem)

Paragraph Two: How problems in society are not contributing to our wellbeing

  • Society has become extremely lazy, narcissistic and isolated since the development of technology and social media. Evidence suggests that level of wellbeing has declined ever since with the rise of cyber bullying etc.
  • People are in a competition to be the best CONSTANTLY- vulnerable and insecure
  • We need to make ourselves aware of these consequences, this could work through shock tactics e.g. calculating the time spend using our phone on a large scale=time wasted 

Paragraph Three: Food industry and big companies power

  • Manipulation of the vulnerable through advertising
  • Placing of products in stores
  • Food labelling
  • We need to be properly educated about nutritional values in food, maybe one good thing is that the younger generation will be familiar with the traffic light system and vaguely familiar with balanced diets, but different types of fats etc and how damaging they are.
  • Talk about domestic sciences being scrapped, how this has had a negative impact on our life skills, need to be taught how to cook!!

Paragraph Four: Avoidable health conditions 

  • Leading on to obesity and related health conditions; heart disease and diabetes
  • How much the NHS spends on diabetes; where else could this money go?
  • What is being done already- talk about tax on sugary drinks
  • Also how much the NHS spends on tooth extraction
  • Smoking cessation  
  • If more emphasis was put on how serious the consequences are for making these life choices then people may choose to make alternative choices.
  • Exercise should be emphasised in schools, especially with further education e.g. compulsory sports classes on Wednesdays being scrapped 


Conclusion

  • Not enough importance is being put on our individual wellbeing which is creating a viscous cycle with current pressures in society, including too much pressure being put on NHS staff with having to over work for less pay due to government cuts.
  • If more money was put into educating todays younger generation about the negative consequences that making poor lifestyle choices can have both individually and on society then the changes in NHS spending on ‘avoidable’ conditions will become evident
  • Money can be spent in more valuable areas elsewhere 


RESEARCH TO DO (ASAP)


  • More academic references
  • Government spending on education
  • Government cuts on the NHS
  • NHS spending on inadequate areas
  • How care has suffered due to lack of resources
  • How much obesity has risen in the last few decades
  • What are the biggest health concerns in the UK right now